Free examples

Made-up pitches, from weak to strong, judged in full with a rewrite. This is exactly what a check gives you. Every person and company in them is fictional.

Sample · Cold email · Weak
The leading provider
Not to this one. 10 out of 100
Strong 0OK 2Weak 8
Sample · LinkedIn message · Weak
Impressed by your background
Not to this one. 10 out of 100
Strong 0OK 2Weak 8
Sample · Cold email · Weak
Just following up
Not to this one. 5 out of 100
Strong 0OK 1Weak 9
Sample · Cold email · Middling
Congrats on the hires
On a good day. 65 out of 100
Strong 4OK 5Weak 1
Sample · LinkedIn message · Middling
Half the day on research
On a good day. 75 out of 100
Strong 5OK 5Weak 0
Sample · Cold email · Middling
Month-end
On a good day. 55 out of 100
Strong 4OK 3Weak 3
Sample · Cold email · Strong
The no-reply address
Yes, I would. 100 out of 100
Strong 10OK 0Weak 0
Sample · LinkedIn message · Strong
Sign-ups, but no bookings
Yes, I would. 95 out of 100
Strong 9OK 1Weak 0